pin this somewhere visible. this is everything from the swipe file condensed into one reference.
| Element | Target | Red Flag |
|---|---|---|
| Subject line | 2-6 words, no hype | ALL CAPS, "urgent", clickbait |
| Email length | 80 words max (Email 1), under half a page | Needs scrolling, multiple paragraphs |
| Personalisation | Specific to THEM (trigger, company, role) | "Dear business owner" or "Hi there" |
| Social proof | Specific result + timeframe + matched industry | "We help hundreds of companies" |
| CTA | Soft, low commitment, conversational | Calendly link on first touch, "let me know" |
| Follow-ups | Each adds NEW value | "Just bumping this", "circling back" |
| Sequence length | 5 emails over 15-16 days | Stopping after 1-2 emails |
| Testing | One variable at a time | Changing everything at once |
| Volume | 100+ emails, 100+ days minimum | 20/day for 2 weeks then quitting |
| Inboxes | 10-15 to spread volume | Sending everything from 1-2 accounts |
→ most replies come from emails 3, 4, or 5. not email 1. → the breakup email (email 5) often gets the highest response rate → positive interest rate matters more than reply rate (10 angry replies is not progress) → if you can systemise your value assets, you produce 10 per hour instead of 1 → the PPQ Framework keeps your first email under 80 words every time
what you built in this swipe file:
if you've ticked all of those, you have a complete cold email system. not just templates. a system.